Joni Mitchell “The Magdalene Laundries”. For the way men looked at me. The B rhyme – what am I referring to there? Learn to write the songs you've always wanted to TODAY! VERSE 1:  A  |  B  |  A  |  B  (internal rhyme shame/Magdalene isolates “Laundries” to rhyme with line 2), VERSE 2:  C  |  B  |  C  |  B  (internal rhyme stain/Magdalene isolates “Laundries” to rhyme with line 2), VERSE 3:  D  |  B  |  D  |  B  (internal rhyme drain/Magdalene isolates “Laundries” to rhyme with line 2), VERSE 4:  E  |  F  |  E  |  F  (no B rhyme, no internal rhyme).

She did an exceptional job of emulating the not-so-happy endings and the open nature of the conflict with the song’s structure. I'd be cast in shame. On her 1994 album Turbulent Indigo Joni Mitchell has one of the most descriptive, powerful songs you’ll ever hear. They wilt the grass they walk upon, they leech the light out of a room. Being sent to a nunnery.

Joni was accompanied by a traditional Irish folk band, The Chieftans.

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No spam and no sharing of your information. Verse 3 frames the nuns as harsh, not charitable (a reference back to the BRIDGE), and inhumane “they wilt the grass they walk upon, they leech the light out of a room” – all leading to the final verse. Designed by Elegant Themes | Powered by WordPress. Like some lame bulb that never blooms come any spring. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam.

She intentionally leaves the B rhyme out, separating it from the rest of the song.      (type NOSPAM). Tho not shown in this video clip, Joni joined Bob Dylan and other performers during the encore of each show. Founder of the group, Paddy Moloney is playing the tin whistle.    Problem:  

Guitarist/producer Ry Cooder, who also performed with The Chieftans at the event, said The Magdalene Laundry song was his musical highlight of the whole three days.

BRIDGE And the cruel and grueling existence for the so-called sin of having a child out of wedlock, with no where else to go. Note the rhyme pattern change in the last verse, the lack of Magdalene Laundries being mentioned at all in the last verse, and finally, no B rhyme being carried into the verse. This is an ongoing issue that’s only recently been acknowledged, with the laundries being closed. I’d be cast in shame into the Magdalene laundries. Fallen women sentenced into dreamless drudgery. Joni Mitchell-The Magdalene Laundries (Live in Japan) Nara, Japan, May 22, 1994 Video from The Aionoshi Festival in Nara, Japan and staged at Todaiji, an eighth-century Buddhist temple.

Branded as a jezebel, I knew I was not bound for Heaven: Sorry, your blog cannot share posts by email. Mitchell does a great job of using the rhyme pattern to create a strong tie for each element of the song – with the exception of the last verse. 'It was the zenith of that whole thing and most of it was just junk, including my performance.'

It is truly heartbreaking, and in the recording of Turbulent Indigo, towards the end of the song, Joni almost gives out a weeping lament. Excellent and tragic. Staggering rhyme in this way gets the listener in a mode of hearing the rhyme before it happens.

Comment using your Facebook profile, or by registering at this site. 'The Chieftans backing up Joni Mitchell when she did that song was bone-chilling,' said Cooder. This in turn serves to move the forward in a consistent, expected, intuitive way, with the listener anticipating the upcoming sound/rhyme. It uses an internal rhyme in the last line of each of the first three verses to set up the hook/title and separate it from the core of the verse.

The Magdalene Laundries. They’d like to drive us down the drain at the Magdalene laundries. Prostitutes and destitutes – and temptresses like me: Post was not sent - check your email addresses! On her 1994 album Turbulent Indigo Joni Mitchell has one of the most descriptive, powerful songs you’ll ever hear. These bloodless brides of Jesus if they had just once glimpsed their groom The song is an exceptional example of taking a news topic and finding the human side that speaks of the injustice, but never sounds like it’s a protest song – it never talks at the listener, takes a position and pounds at it.
When they sent me to the sisters. Oh charity! The best thing about this song is that there’s no chorus. Not any spring by Joni Mitchell.

You must be registered and log in to add a permanently indexed comment. Songwriting Hobby As A Path To A Better Life, Colter Wall Sings Ian Tyson’s “Bob Fudge”, Structure:  Verse  |  Verse  |  Bridge  |  Verse |  Verse, The addition of a Bridge in the middle of the song is unconventional. In the steaming stains of the Magdalene laundries. We’re trying to get things white as snow all of us woe-begotten-daughters I was an unmarried girl, I’d just turned twenty-seven I was an unmarried girl. Bridget got that belly by her parish priest. This song violates the rules when it comes to structure: The structure lends itself to leaving the song unresolved. Her use of only B rhymes in the BRIDGE serves to anchor the bridge squarely in the song as the summary moment. Joni was accompanied by a traditional Irish folk band, The Chieftans. When they sent me to the sisters for the way men looked at me. No, not any spring

She crafts a first person story about a young girl incarcerated in one of Ireland’s Magdalene institutions – The Magdalene Laundries for being over twenty, unmarried and attractive. I knew I was not bound for Heaven. VERSE In 1994, they were still open and had residents like the ones described in Mitchell’s song. They just stuffed her in a hole! Report problem with this video: She crafts a first person story about a young girl incarcerated in one of Ireland’s Magdalene institutions – The Magdalene Laundries for being over twenty, unmarried and attractive. As they say in poetry, form follows function. Most girls come here pregnant, some by their own fathers. VERSE
Surely to God you’d think at least some bells should ring! — The Chieftains: the authorized biography by John Glatt. The last verse leaves you wondering how many girls this happened to – a subtle protest song stressed not by yelling anything, but by leaving something out. Note how the B rhyme is the second line for each of the first three verses of the song. I'd just turned twenty-seven.

One day I’m going to die here too, and they’ll plant me in the dirt – Peg O’Connell died today – she was a cheeky girl, a flirt Why do they call this heartless place Our Lady of Charity?

The song is an exceptional example of taking a news topic and finding the …

Video from The Aionoshi Festival in Nara, Japan and staged at Todaiji, an eighth-century Buddhist temple. It simply takes a first person account and uses elegant metaphor, figurative language and prosody to bring the speaker’s situation to life. Then they’d know, and they’d drop the stones concealed behind their rosaries. Learn how your comment data is processed. VERSE The final concert was broadcast live on TV in Japan by NHK and elsewhere as The Great Music Experience. But it was nice to have the Chieftians as backup for this sad song... Ry Cooder as well, on slide guitar.

Branded as a jezebel. Not any spring.